One of my Favorite Restaurants Corrections

One of my Favorite Restaurants Corrections

What items are on the menu?

There are many kinds of item on the menu. For example jajangmyean , jjangbbong, Tray jajangmyean others are on the menu.

There are many kinds of items on the menu. For example, jajangmyean , jjangbbong, Tray jajangmyean and others are on the menu.

Jajangmyean         black noodles / noodles with black sauce, pork, onion, black mixed sauce noodles/ jajangmyeon

Noodles in a black bean sauce*

Jjangbbong          spicy noodles with seafood/ spicy  seafood noodle soup*

Tray jajangmyean            

Noodles in a black bean sauce, served on a tray.*

 

 

My favorite restaurant is mom's touch in Koreatech.
There are so many menu.
My favorite food is 싸이burger.

There are so many items on menu.

Mom's Touch near the front entrance of Koreatech

 

This is buffet restaurant. Menu has only one list.

There is menu that has only one list./ This buffet restaurant has just one menu. / There is a buffet. Only one list is on the menu.

This is a buffet restaurant.  You can eat many different foods.*

There is a lot of food on the menu.
For example, grilled pork belly, steamed rice bowl, miso soup and many drinks.

miso soup

fermented soybean soup

 

 

 

It wraps up grind meat and some vegetables in dough like pizza’s dough but it is as small as palm’s size.

dumplings

 

 

MacDonald is worldwide American restaurant. There are lots of menu.

Also It has different menus. For example Fried vegetable, noodles, some drinks etc. Many people are there. Why do I like this restaurants? Because It is my first restaurants with my girlfriend in Chun an. When I came to Chun an first time. I said to her "I want to eat korean fast food." She took me to there. And another reason is that I've been to many korean fast food, but 떡볶이나라 is the best , also quantity and quality are good value for money. So I like to go there.

 

 

I like Korean food. One of my favorite restaurants is located right here in Cheonan. It's called LA북창동순두부찌개. This restaurant's soft tofu stew is very delicious. On the menu, there are normal soft tofu stew, dumpling soft tofu stew, sea food soft tofu stew and so on. I like sea food soft tofu stew better than the others.
To get there: Take the 400 bus in the direction of Cheonan. Ride for 40 minutes. Get off at the Cheonan bus terminal stop. Walk about 50 meters. It's cross the Arario park. It is 2nd floor on a building. You can find it.

It’s across from Arario park.  It’s on the 2^nd floor of a building.

 

 

If you have a some time, I recommend that you go there.

On the menu there is just two selection. Cow sirloin and Cow sashimi.

Beef sirloin and beef sashimi

There are many side dishes like raw garlics, onions and some fresh lettuce.

Actually, all of the food that Mad for Garlic serve has many garlic as its name by various recipe like boiled garlic or fry garlic.

Grilled Beef Tripe is made of intestines(?) of a cow.

Tripe is the stomach of a cow.

[Correct]I like this restaurant because they serves Kimchi bean sprouts soup for [an] appetizer.

Last Night

Last Night

 

Last night I had dinner with some friends of mine.  First we ate pork at a local restaurant.  Then we went to a friend’s house.  We listened to some music.  After we listened to music, we decided to go to Yawoori. 

                  We hung out in Yawoori for a while and then I felt tired.  I said goodbye to my friends before I got into a cab and went home.

Use the simple past to talk about finished actions.
Pay attention to irregular simple past forms.
Use words to put events in order such as first, then, after, before, next, finally, in the end, and lastly.

The Graduate Corrections

The Graduate Corrections

One man has recently graduated from a university. and he come back to home.

a university. and he come

incorrect use of a conjunction

a university and he

form

third person singular     +     base form + s or es

After that , Benjamin go to Elaine's wedding and he run away with Elaine.

Benjamin go

He run

form

third person singular     +     base form + s or es

Benjamin goes

He runs

But she has affair with Benjamin.

has affair

Use a/an or the with the singular form of count nouns.

Elaine leaves, Benjamin realizes that he truely loves Elaine. So when Elaine's wedding , Benjamin takes truley love, run away.

Elaine leaves, Benjamin realizes that he truely loves Elaine.

After Elaine leaves, Benjamin realizes that he truely loves Elaine.

truly

So when Elaine's wedding , Benjamin takes truley love, run away.

When Elaine gets married, Benjamin takes his true love and runs away

So he nervous about his future.

he nervous about his future.

Missing verb

He is nervous about his future.

Ben is timid, stupid person and Ben represents difficulties of a young adult.

Use a/an or the with the singular form of count nouns.

Ben is a timid, stupid person and Ben represents difficulties of a young adult.

Mrs. Robinson is a selfish and greedy person.

Greed – noun\

Greedy - adjective

Mrs Robinson represents American middle class to like pleasure of the moment.

??????

Ben is a typical student in the early 20's appearance.

Ben : timid, shy, sometimes brave

Ben is timid, shy, sometimes brave

Robinson : very very attractive, erotic

Mrs Robinson is very very attractive, erotic

Conjunctions connect two or more adjectives in a list.

Mrs Robinson is very very attractive and erotic

 

 

 

 

I think Ben shows us about 20's worries. This movie shows also what we have to do in the future.

 

 

 

 

In a word, very interesting. To me, the movie ‘The Graduate’ has fresh topic. Throughout the moive time, I watch the movie with concentration. And I think if I were Ben`s position, how did I. Anne Bancroft who in charge of Mrs. Robinson is very charming and sexy. This movie gets good grade from film critic. The movie was pretty funny.

Anne Bancroft who plays Mrs. Robinson is very charming and sexy.

And I think if I were Ben`s position, what would I do?

 

 

It was a good movie except for one thing. I can't find the relevance of the title and the content.I'm bored at first, but increasingly it caused tension in the movie. The film makes me know not human nature and sexuality, but also real what love is.

The film makes me know not only human nature and sexuality, but also real what love is.

Not only A, but also B.

One of my Favorite Restaurants

One of my favorite restaurants is located right here in Chungcheon Nam Do.  It’s called 꺼먹돼지.  The pork is excellent.  The owner of the restaurant raises the pigs on his farm which is located a few kilometers away from the restaurant.  He even grows the vegetables for the side dishes.  His wife’s kimchi is very spicy and a little sour.  The scallion kimchi is my favorite.  It’s a korean barbecue restaurant, so you cook the meat yourself over coals.  I think it’s fun to flip the meat over with a pair of tongs and to cut the meat into bite-sized pieces with a pair of scissors. I like to add a little bit of sea salt while the meat is cooking.  If you like, you can also grill onions, rice cake, and garlic while the meat is cooking.  When everything is ready, I like to wrap up a piece of pork, some grilled onions, a sliver of raw garlic, and some red pepper paste in a piece of fresh lettuce.  Mmmm…. Delicious!

 

 

To get there:  Take the 400 bus in the direction of Cheonan.  Ride for about 20 minutes.  Get off at the Dong Woo Apartments stop.  Walk East about 25 meters.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What is your favorite kind of food?

 

Where do you eat it?

 

What items are on the menu?

 

What is your favorite dish on the menu?

 

How can you get there from campus?

 

Write about your favorite restaurant.

The Graduate

The Graduate

 

Ben has recently graduated from a university.  T or F

 

During the day, Ben goes to many job interviews.  T or F

 

Ben has an affair with Mrs. Robinson.  T or F

 

Elaine is Mrs. Robinson’s younger sister.  T or F

 

Ben and Elaine eventually get married.  T or F

 

 

Describe the setting.

Describe two of the characters.

What do you think about this movie?

 

Lord of the Flies Corrections

Lord of the Flies

Corrections

 

1. Children are missing after plane accident. They hardly survive in uninhabited island. They are divided two groups. One is elected Ralph as leader, the other elected Jack as leader. They regularly collide over decisions. finally Jack's group kills Ralph's group except Ralph.

2. Ralph : Leadership , Equality , Peace , Nokill

 Jack : Cruel , Power , Murder , Desire to be recognized by children

3. I think the movie show human nature. Human have a lot of freedom, they erupt human nature. For example, At first Jack dosen't want kill friends. But finally Jack dosen't mind about it. So human has evil everyday. We must think about it.

 

1) Describe the setting.

A plane fell down. there are some children in plane. children were isolated in uninhabited island. they made two groups for survival. they came into conflict each other.

 

2) Describe two of the characters.

One character is Ralph. he is intelligent so he became a leader.

the other character is Jack. he is ambitious so he disappointed when Ralph became a leader. Later, Jack lead some children who support him.

 

 3) What do you think about this movie?

 I feel discomfort because I seem see dark side in human. this movie shows human nature. as time goes on, they reveal their true colors. for example. later, Jack committed a murder. he didn't feel of guilt. this movie made me bitter.

 

1) Describe the setting.

Flight accident is happen and childrens are isolated in island. And the island is an uninhabited island. And childrens make two group. One group's leader is Ralph and the other group's leader is Jack

 

 

 

2) Describe two of the characters.

Ralph try to suevive many children's. And peaceful leader. He have a positive mind.

I think Jack is a tyrant. he ignore Piggi. And he have a negitive mind. I think Jack's inside is shrouded in fear. But he didn't expresse his mind. And he act as strong.

 

3) What do you think about this movie?

I think this movie's meaning is people reveal brutality by fear. And fear make a Social cut - throat gangsik. And broke the rule, and don't judgement by rational.

 

 

 

Lord of the Flies

A plane crashes in the ocean.  The survivors, who are mostly school children of various ages, use a raft to reach an uninhabited island.  There are beaches and small hills on the island.  The shoreline is either beaches or rocks.  The island is covered with tropical trees, some of which are banana trees.  

Ralph becomes the leader of the group because he is the most responsible member.  He is kind to the younger children.  He is loyal and trustworthy.

Jack enjoys breaking the rules.  He is cruel – especially to Piggy. 

Piggy is overweight.  He is not in good shape.  He is, however, intelligent, rational, and calm.

I think this movie tells us a lot about the dangerous side of human nature.  It also shows that rules are an important part of society.

Lord of the Flies

1)  Describe the setting.

2)  Describe two of the characters.

3)  What do you think about this movie?

Week Three Corrections

Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea.  There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown.There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.

 

There     location.         I live there.

 

There is

There are       existence

 

Buyeo is not very famous.

Buyeo is a very important place in history.

Buyeo was a capital of Bakjae.

There are so many tourist attractions.

 

I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor

 

In + a city       I grew up in Incheon.

 

Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.

introvert, it is hard

 

If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!

Form   wants to

Wanna      not standard spelling,  can be found in internet chatrooms and text messages

 

I want to play soccer.

Standard pronunciation   “wanna”

 

 

My merit is that I am prudent.  Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision.  But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.

Incorrect use of a conjunction

Capitalize the pronoun I

 

Ironically, it is a demerit that I have a lot of things on my mind.

 

And my another Hobby, computer games.

Missing verb   (is)

Playing computer games

Hobby doesn’t need to be capitalized

Incorrect use of a conjunction

 

Wrong word       another

My other hobby

 

I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year.  So i couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?

Sudden Attack

Capitalize the pronoun I

Incorrect use of a conjunction (2)

 

aren`t you think so too?

Don’t you think so too?

 

Don’t you like it too?

 

Tag questions ask for agreement.

 

My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.

Incorrect use of a conjunction.

My doesn’t need to be capitalized.

Form         when the subject is third person singular (that), base form + s or es

 

My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society,’ so my motto is ‘carpe diem.’   That means seize the day.

 

I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.

 

Some country names use “THE.”      The United States, the United Kingdom of Great Britain,  the Republic of Korea, the Philippines.

 

I’m from South Korea.

Capitalize the names of countries.

 

I grew up in a state called Gwangju.

Wrong word      state

city

 

When I get diet, I do some exercise ( jogging etc ).

Wrong word     get diet

Go on a diet

( jogging etc ).

Like = for example

When I go on a diet, I do some exercise, like jogging.

At this time, I loose weight and my body get more healtier.

Wrong word                 loose  (opposite of tight)

lose

my body get

form    third person singular subject + base form + s or es

form of a comparative                healthier

I lose weight and my body gets healthier.

 

When the opportunity, i wants to do boxing later.

 

When the opportunity

Missing subject, missing verb

When I get the opportunity,

 

i wants to do boxing later.

Capitalize I

Form       first person singular subject + base form

I want to do boxing later.

 

How to be healthy, first, I evenly eat a lot of food.

How to be healthy

How to be healthy?       Rhetorical question.

Don’t ask rhetorical questions.

 

I evenly eat a lot of food.

Wrong word        evenly

I don’t understand what this means.

 

I should exercise every day, because These days Increased my body weight.

These and Increased don’t need to be capitalized.

These days Increased my body weight

these days I am gaining weight.

 

 

Jogging and push ups on the night

Get up early in the morning.

To ride a school bus

Eat slowly,eat evenly

 

Jogging and push ups on the night

Missing subject , missing verb

I go jogging and I do push ups at night.

 

Get up early in the morning.

Missing subject

I get up early in the morning to ride the school bus.

 

Eat slowly,eat evenly

Missing subjects.

I eat slowly.  I eat evenly.

                             Meaning?

 

I like every exercise and activity! so I`m enough healthy

!  exclamation point.   Goes at the end of a sentence.

 

I`m enough healthy

Word order

 

Enough + noun        I always get enough sleep.

Adjective + enough        I’m healthy enough.

 

 

I don't now why that deleted. Sorry to Proffessor So Now I replay to write assingment.

Know

Professor

 

replay to write

rewrite

 

 

 

Week 2 corrections

Week 2 corrections

And I sometimes play food volleyball with my friends.

Incorrect use of a conjunction.

I sometimes play foot volleyball with my friends.

I think the best way to keep fit is not eat too much. So if i were hungry, i didn't eat too much.

Form   to + not + base form

I think the best way to keep fit is to not eat too much

if I were hungry           conditionals  not real but possible

If I were hungry, I wouldn’t eat too much.

Incorrect use of a conjunction.

I like playing basketball, so I play a basketball with my friends at weekend.

Play basketball

Exercise is a great way to keep fit. I always do fifty push ups and I play table tennis 2 times a week. I run when I feel good. I sometimes play badminton with my friends at the courts near my apartment

Good job!

I sometimes walking and go jogging at night.

Missing verb.\

Go walking

I usually eat rice, eat fruit.

I usually eat rice and fruit.

I usually eat rice and I eat fruit.

Actually, I seldom exercise and play sports.

Seldom, rarely, barely, scarcely

Nice job!!!

I often stretch muscles of legs.

I often stretch my leg muscles.

In fact, I do seldom excercise for keep fit regularly. It doesn't mean 'I don't like excercise'. I just do excercise for fun.

To keep fit

Word order

I seldom do exercise

I wake up every morning and 30 minutes in the morning and exercise before going to push up the habit of more than 10 times also use the stairs instead of using the elevator and walk to the nearest distance.

Don’t use Google Translate!!!!!

corrections homework

Identify and correct the mistakes

Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea.  There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown.There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.

I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor

Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.

If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!

My merit is that I am prudent.  Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision.  But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.

And my another Hobby, computer games.

I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year.  So i couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?

My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.

I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.

week 1 corrections

Evening class corrections.  Week  1

 

I'm freshman.

I'm a freshman.          Singular form of a countable noun.   Articles, a, an, the.

 

I have 4 family except me.

There are five people in my family including me.

 

My hobby is too many.

Too many = negative meaning

So = emphasis

So + many + countable nouns

So+ much + non countable nouns

So + adjective

I have so many hobbies.

 

My habit is biting my nails. So my nails so short.

                                                            Missing verb (are)

FANBOYS    for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so

Conjunctions – join two sentences.

My habit is biting my nails so my nails are so short.

 

My family members are parents, younger sister and me.

I have parents and a younger sister.

 

I'm 21 years old, sophomore in Koreatech.

I'm 21 years old and I am a sophomore at Koreatech.

 

I'm smoker. I know smoking is harmful. But i can't stop because of toxication.

I'm a smoker. I know smoking is harmful, but I can’t stop because I’m addicted to nicotine.

My family is consisted of me, mother, father, and one older brother.

I have parents and an older brother.

 

I don't well english. Because i'm korean it’s no wonder. But i want to well english. So i will endeavor in jason's class and talk to many foreigners.

I don't  speak English well . Because I'm korean it’s no wonder.  I want to speak English well so I will endeavor in Jason’s class and talk to many foreigners.

 

I'm 21 years olds.  And I live in Cheonan.

I'm 21 years old and I live in Cheonan.

 

i'm a sophmore in koreatech and my majors in mechatronics control system. therefore i interest in green enery.

I'm a sophmore at Koreatech and I major in mechatronics control system, therefore I’m interested in green energy.

 

I major in\

My major is /

 

my hometown is Daegu. But now i am living in studio apartment near my university.

My hometown is Daegu, but now I am living in a studio apartment near my university.

 

I major Mechatronics digital system. and I`m junior.

I major in  Mechatronics digital system, and I`m a junior.

 

And I grew up in a Incheon. There are big and famous airport name of Incheon International Airport.And there are beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go on trip using bicycle, you must passing there

I grew up in Incheon.

you must passing there         location

location or existence?

There are big and famous airport

There is + singular, non countable

There are + plural

There is a big and famous airport

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea.  There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown.There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.

I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor

Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.

If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!

My merit is that I am prudent.  Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision.  But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.

And my another Hobby, computer games.

I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year.  So i couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?

My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.

I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.

 

 

 

 

I'm excited to hear this class.

Wrong meaning

Hear vs listen

Attend a class\ take a class/ join a class / participate in a class

Listen to a lecture

 

 

 

Gwangju is famous of delicious dish.

Wrong preposition

Famous for

 

I`m very happy to meet all of you and I wanna be with you closely.

Wrong meaning

To be with you?????         To be in a romantic relationship.

I want to be close with all of you.

To be close with someone = to be good friends

 

Rice is mainly eaten in the cafeteria.

Wrong meaning

I mainly eat my meals in the cafeteria.

 

Of course I played with them soccer, football and so on.

Word order

I played soccer, football and so on with them.

 

Let's get along with together this semester.

No object, preposition

 

Let's get along with each other this semester.

 

This semester I live in.

Word order

Hanul dormitory

 

I grew up in Cheonan, Cheonan spent all of my school days.

I grew up in Cheonan.  I spent all of my school days in Cheonan.

 

Summer vacation is approaching the future, I plan to go on a trip with friends.

Run-on sentence

Summer vacation is approaching.  I plan to go on a trip with friends.

 

I'm not good at English. so I'm afraid english but well I want to english.

I'm not good at English, so I'm afraid of English but I want  to speak English well.

 

Above all, Byungcheon doesn't have anything to play with, so I can't tell you about it.  Though I can't go outside to play, I'm fine that I'm making friends here.

Wrong word

To hang out

 

Here is a great place to live because as you know people are kindness and mindful.

Form

Adjective   -    kind

 

I'm pleased you are my professor and expect next monday.

Wrong word   expect  

To look forward to

I'm pleased you are my professor and I’m looking forward to next Monday.\

If you want to see my play come to our performance

If you want to see me play the guitar come to our performance