Monday, May 19, 2014

The Graduate Corrections


The Graduate Corrections

One man has recently graduated from a university. and he come back to home.

a university. and he come

incorrect use of a conjunction

a university and he

form

third person singular     +     base form + s or es

After that , Benjamin go to Elaine's wedding and he run away with Elaine.

Benjamin go

He run

form

third person singular     +     base form + s or es

Benjamin goes

He runs

But she has affair with Benjamin.

has affair

Use a/an or the with the singular form of count nouns.

Elaine leaves, Benjamin realizes that he truely loves Elaine. So when Elaine's wedding , Benjamin takes truley love, run away.

Elaine leaves, Benjamin realizes that he truely loves Elaine.

After Elaine leaves, Benjamin realizes that he truely loves Elaine.

truly

So when Elaine's wedding , Benjamin takes truley love, run away.

When Elaine gets married, Benjamin takes his true love and runs away

So he nervous about his future.

he nervous about his future.

Missing verb

He is nervous about his future.

Ben is timid, stupid person and Ben represents difficulties of a young adult.

Use a/an or the with the singular form of count nouns.

Ben is a timid, stupid person and Ben represents difficulties of a young adult.

Mrs. Robinson is a selfish and greedy person.

Greed – noun\

Greedy - adjective

Mrs Robinson represents American middle class to like pleasure of the moment.

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Ben is a typical student in the early 20's appearance.

Ben : timid, shy, sometimes brave

Ben is timid, shy, sometimes brave

Robinson : very very attractive, erotic

Mrs Robinson is very very attractive, erotic

Conjunctions connect two or more adjectives in a list.

Mrs Robinson is very very attractive and erotic

 

 

 

 

I think Ben shows us about 20's worries. This movie shows also what we have to do in the future.

 

 

 

 

In a word, very interesting. To me, the movie ‘The Graduate’ has fresh topic. Throughout the moive time, I watch the movie with concentration. And I think if I were Ben`s position, how did I. Anne Bancroft who in charge of Mrs. Robinson is very charming and sexy. This movie gets good grade from film critic. The movie was pretty funny.

Anne Bancroft who plays Mrs. Robinson is very charming and sexy.

And I think if I were Ben`s position, what would I do?

 

 

It was a good movie except for one thing. I can't find the relevance of the title and the content.I'm bored at first, but increasingly it caused tension in the movie. The film makes me know not human nature and sexuality, but also real what love is.

The film makes me know not only human nature and sexuality, but also real what love is.

Not only A, but also B.

7 comments:

  1. 1. Benjamin graduated from the prestigious University of the East. People who around he celebrate him, but he is nervous about future. At this time, Mrs. Robinson seduces Benjamin. At first, Benjamin shakes off the temptation, but he sex with her later. Then he falls in love with Elaine, Mrs. Robinson's daughter. Mrs. Robinson jealousy this situation. So, she says to Elaine the fact that she had sex with him. Benjamin goes to Berkeley for Elaine.They fall in love again.

    2. .Benjamin was a shy boy. He falls in love with an older woman at first. After experiencing a society, he fixes the spirit. He meets a true love in the end.

    Mrs. Robinson is symbol of jealous.She seduces Benjamin who husband's business partner's son. She is so selfish.

    3. This movie shows the greed and fear of the younger generation. It shows a bias substance universal principle of this society, moral hazard, generation conflict, negative.

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  2. 1. Describe the setting.
    21 years old, Benjamin who a model student comes back home after college graduate. One day, He having many shyness falls into physical temptation of Mrs. Robinson who likes enjoyment of the moment. Timely Elaine, Mrs. Robinson daughter comes back from the country university. Gradually Benjamin becomes familiar with her, Mrs. Robinson is very jealous of her daughter.

    2. Describe two of the characters.
    Benjamin Braddock : Benjamin is shy, tranquil and he is a model student. He is afraid of uncertain future with college graduate.
    He falls into temptation of Mrs. Robinson. Also He falls in love with Elaine. Increasingly, He grows up.
    Mrs. Robinson : Mrs. Robinson is the wife of Benjamin father's business partner. She fascinates Benjamin and she is jealous of a daughter because he loves Elaine, her daughter. She seems like a selfish person.

    3. What do you think about this movie?
    In the beginning when I saw the movie, I couldn't understand on the implication of the film. So, I searched enternet about the movie. In result, I could understand the meaning of every scene. I thought actors perfomance is really amazing and OST of the movie charms my ears.

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  3. 1.Describe the setting.
    After graduating college, Benjamin came back to his country. Just a twenty one-year-old Ben was very shy and full of fear person because he doesn't know what to do in the future. One day, Mrs. Robbinson who is Ben's neighborhood tried to tempt Benjamin sexually and they were getting closer. Few days after, Mr Robbinson introduced his daughter Elaine to Benjamin. Benjamin loves Elaine. Mrs. Robbinson full of jealousy revealed their relationship between her and Ben. Shocked Elaine leaved Ben and she prepared wedding with other man. After her disappearing, Benjamin thinks deep and he figured out his love to Elaine. Finally he goes to Elaine's wedding to get her and they escape the wedding hall.

    2.Describe two of the characters.
    Benjamin - He was just a shy and thinkful boy. But finally he finds his true love and challeges for a woman he loves.
    Mrs Robbinson - She enjoys the moment. So she tries to tempt people who she wants. At the same time, she is full of jealousy.

    3.What do you think about this movie?
    I think Benjamin is same with twenty-year-old Korean man who are interesting in women. Of course I want to find my love as soon as possible. After watching this film, I figured out that the best way to find true love is challenging. So I will do challege to my love like him, not be shy anymore.

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  4. Describe the setting.

    Benjamin graduated his university and return home.
    return->returns
    one day,after party he drives Mrs. Robinson to her home.
    Mrs. Robinson tempts Benjamin and they fall in affair.
    after ward Mrs. Robinson's husband introduce her daughter to Benjamin.
    and they fall in love.
    Mrs. Robinson be infuriated and tell the truth.
    Ellain go away but finally Benjamin gains love.


    Describe two of the characters.

    Benjamin is shy and pure boy.
    but he has an affair.
    I think he representative of twenty boys.

    Mrs. Robinson is represent of enjoyful and jealousy.
    She tempts Ben and successful.
    but after her daughter and Ben fall in love,She resents and jealousy her daunghter

    What do you think about this movie?

    this movie give to me a lesson
    I think we should restrain ourselves.
    sometimes we temp to something but we should relax and think rational.
    because, we are human!!!!

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  6. 1.It is social criticism movie drawn by spelling and daughter and Mrs. Robinson graduated from prestigious universities, seduced Benjamin came back to Los Angelo database.

    2.Benjamin: Benjamin has graduated from the prestigious university, but his serious about the uneasy future.
    And thus connecting the sex to the temptation of Mrs. Robinson who had visited in moth guest chance within to do so. Enjoying physical pleasure with her at night frequently, to spend time at the pool in the morning free.
    It is recommended that the parent is to love and Benjamin out to do so.
    Benjamin, fallen, but at the sight of his heart is weakened to tears of Elaine.
    And, make extra sure that you want to love her until the end.
    If you look at the situation that occurs with it, conflict and obsession can be seen rather than a romance
    It's the feeling you are talking as if the background of the era.

    Mrs. Robinson: Money is often Mrs. Robinson. It seems that shows superficially the rich of that era.
    If you look at the figure of her satisfy the desire to tempt the young man age is also large, can be seen indirectly the figure of the rich people of that era.
    With him from contesting the words of Benjamin To meet her daughter, to interfere with the meeting with Elaine.
    It is a vice heart desire while many, to want to protect the possessions of their own

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  7. 1. Recent college graduate Benjamin Braddock is trapped into an affair with Mrs. Robinson, who happens to be the wife of his father's business partner and then finds himself falling in love with her daughter, Elaine.

    2. Benjamin Braddock : Benjamin is a recent college graduate with no well-defined aim in life. He is seduced by an older woman, Mrs. Robinson and then proceeds to fall in love with her daughter Elaine. He is represented indefinite young people.
    Mrs. Robinson : She is the wife of Benjamin father's business partner. She seduces Benjamin and disturbs him and her daughter’s love. She looks like person who desire to fill herself.

    3. I think this film tells about deviation piled a momentary impulse, not love. However, after such a deviation in the bus, the last confused expression of the main character of men and women expresses a vague anxiety from deviation and impulse in our daily life

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