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Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. There is not very famous. But I'm very proud
of my hometown.There is very important place in history. There was a capital of
Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.
I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic
point. because There has international airport and harbor
Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to
speak in English to someone.
If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just
tell me!
My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash
decision. But, ironically it is demerit that
i have a lot of things on my mind.
And my another Hobby, computer games.
I like suddenattack so much that i played
all day long last year. So i couldn`t
studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’.
So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a
state called Gwangju.
1. There -> It , There -> It, There -> It, is -> were, attration -> attractions
ReplyDelete2. in Incheon, traffic point, because there were international airport and harbor.
3. an -> a
4. wanna play -> wants to play
5. Because the merit what I am prudent, I don't make a rash decision.
6. My another hobby is computer game.
7. that -> such that
8. So my motto,"carpediem" \, means seize the day.
9. I grew up and born in Gwangju, South Korea.
Um.. somewhat confused
Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown.There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.
ReplyDelete→ Buyeo is city that located in the middle of Korea. There are not famous places, but I`m very proud of my hometown. Buyeo is very important city about hisroy. There was the capital of Bakjae. There are so many tourist attraction.
I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor
→ I grew up in Incheon. There is a major transportation base, because there are international airport and harbor
Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.
→ I`m introversive so it is hard to speak to someone in English.
If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!
→If Anyone wants to play soccer with me, just tell me!
My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.
→ My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don`t make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of worries in my mind
And my another Hobby, computer games.
→ And my another hobby is to play computer games.
I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year. So i couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
→ I like 'Sudden Attack’ such that i played all day long during last year. So i couldn’t study well . But i really like my school. Don`t you think so too?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
→ My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’, so my motto is ‘carpe diem’ that means seize the day.
I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.
→ I`m from South Korea, and i grew up in Gwangju
1.Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown.There is very important place in history. (It) was a capital of Bakjae. There (are) so many tourist attraction.
ReplyDelete2.I grew up (in) Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There (are) international airport and harbor
3.Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak(ing) in English to someone.
4.If anyone (want) play soccer with me, just tell me!
5.My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things (in) my mind.
6.And my another Hobby (is) computer games.
7.I like suddenattack (such) that i played all day long last year. So i couldn`t (study) well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
8.My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean(s) seize the day.
9.I’m from () south korea. I grew up in a (place) called Gwangju.
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ReplyDelete1. Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown. There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.
ReplyDelete-> Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. It is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown. It is very important place in history. It was a capital of Bakjae. There are so many tourist attraction.
2. I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor.
-> I grew up in Incheon. There is a major traffic point. Because there is international airport and habor in Incheon.
3. Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.
-> Because I’m an introvert, it is hard to speak English to someone.
4. If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!
If anyone wants to play soccer with me, just tell me!
5. My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.
-> My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don’t make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit because I have a lot of things on my mind.
6. And my another Hobby, computer games.
-> And my another hobby is playing computer games.
7. I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year. So i couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
-> I like suddenattack so much that I played all dat long last year. So I couldn’t study well. But I really like my school, aren’t you?
8. My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
-> My favorit movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So my motto is ‘carpe diem’. It’s mean is seize the day.
9. I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.
-> I’m from the South Korea. I grew up in Gwangju.
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ReplyDelete1.Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown.There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.->
ReplyDeleteBuyeo is located in the middle of Korea. It is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown.Buyeo is very important place in history. Buyeo was a capital of Bakjae. There are so many tourist
2.I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor
->I grew up Incheon. It is a major traffic point, because it has international airport and harbor.
3.Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.
->Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak English to someone.
4.If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!
->If anyone wants to play soccer with me, just tell me!
5.My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.
->My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit because, I have a lot of things on my mind.
6.And my another Hobby, computer games.->And my another Hobby is playing computer games.
7.I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year. So i couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
->I like suddenattack very much, so I played all day long last year. so I couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
8.My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
->My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So my motto is ‘carpe diem’ which means seize the day.
9.I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.
->I’m from south korea. I grew up in Gwang ju
1. Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown.There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.
ReplyDelete→Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. It is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown. It is very important place in history. It was a capital of Bakjae. There are so many tourist attraction.
2. I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor
→I grew up in Incheon. It is a major traffic point, because There are international airport and harbor.
3. Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.
→Because I'm an introvert, it is hard to speak English to someone.
4. If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!
→If anyone wants to play soccer with me, just tell me!
5.My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.
→My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit because, I have a lot of things in my mind.
6. And my another Hobby, computer games.
→And my another hobby is playing computer games.
7. I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year. So i couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
→I like suddenattack very much, so I played all day long during last year. so I couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
8. My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
→My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So my motto is ‘carpe diem’ that means seize the day.
9. I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.
→I’m from south korea. I grew up in Gwang ju
1. Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. It is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown. It is very important place in history. It was a capital of Bakjae.
ReplyDelete2. I grew up in Incheon. It is a major traffic point, because it has international airport and harbor.
3. Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak English to someone.
4. If anyone wants to play soccer with me, just tell me!
5. My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit because i have a lot of things on my mind.
6. And my another Hobby is playing computer games.
7. I like suddenattack so much, so I played all day long last year. so I couldn`t studied well. But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
8. My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So my motto is ‘carpe diem’ that means seize the day.
9. I’m from south korea. I grew up in Gwang ju
1. Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown.There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.
ReplyDelete→Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. It is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown. It is very important place in history. It was a capital of Bakjae. There are so many tourist attraction.
2. I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor
→I grew up in Incheon. It is a major traffic point, because There are international airport and harbor.
3. Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.
→Because I'm an introvert, it is hard to speak English to someone.
4. If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!
→If anyone wants to play soccer with me, just tell me!
5.My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.
→My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit because, I have a lot of things in my mind.
6. And my another Hobby, computer games.
→And my another hobby is playing computer games.
7. I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year. So i couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
→I like suddenattack very much, so I played all day long during last year. so I couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
8. My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
→My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So my motto is ‘carpe diem’ that means seize the day.
9. I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.
→I’m from south korea. I grew up in Gwang ju
Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown.There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.
ReplyDelete-Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. There is nothing famous. But I'm very proud fo my hometown. There is very important place for history. It was a capital of Bakjae dinasty. There are so many tourists.
I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor
-I grew up in Incheon. There is a major point of traffic, because there is a international airport and harbor.
Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.
-Because I'm an introvert, it is hard to speak English to someone.
If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!
-If you wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!
My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.
-My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision.
But, ironically it is demerit that I have a lot of thinking on my mind.
And my another Hobby, computer games.
-And my another hobby is computer games.
I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year. So i couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
-I like suddenattack so much that is computer game's name I played all day long last year. So I couldn't studied well. But I really like my Univ, aren't you think so too?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
-My favorite movie is 'Dead Poets Society', so my motto is 'carpe diem' that means 'seize the day'.
I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.
-I'm from South Korea. I grew up in a city called Gwangju.
1. Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown.There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.
ReplyDelete@@Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. It is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown. It is very important place in history. It was a capital of Bakjae. There are so many tourist attraction.
2. I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor.
@@I grew up in Incheon. It is a major traffic point, because There are international airport and harbor.
3. Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.
@@Because I'm an introvert, it is hard to speak English to someone.
4. If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!
@@If anyone wants to play soccer with me, just tell me!
5.My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.
@@My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit because, I have a lot of things in my mind.
6. And my another Hobby, computer games.
@@And my another hobby is playing computer games.
7. I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year. So i couldn`t studied well.. But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
@@I like suddenattack very much, so I played all day long during last year. so I couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
8. My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
@@My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So my motto is ‘carpe diem’ that means seize the day.
9. I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.
@@I’m from south korea. I grew up in Gwang ju
1. Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown.There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.
ReplyDelete-> Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. It is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown. It is very important place in history. It was a capital of Bakjae. There are so many tourist attraction.
2. I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor
-> I grew up in Incheon. It is a major traffic point, because There are international airport and harbor.
3. Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.
->Because I'm an introvert, it is hard to speak English to someone.
4. If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!
-> If anyone wants to play soccer with me, just tell me!
5.My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.
-> My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit because, I have a lot of things in my mind.
6. And my another Hobby, computer games.
-> And my another hobby is playing computer games.
7. I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year. So i couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
-> I like ‘Suddenattack’ very much, so I played all day long during last year. So I couldn`t studied well. But I really like my school. Don`t you think so too?
8. My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
-> My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So my motto is ‘carpe diem’ that means seize the day.
9. I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.
-> I’m from south korea. I grew up in Gwang ju
1. Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown.There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.
ReplyDelete// Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. Buyeo is not very famous, but I'm very proud of my hometown. Buyeo is very important in history because Buyeo was a capital of Bakjae, and Buyeo has so many tourist attractions.
2. I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor
// I grew up Incheon. Incheon is a major traffic point because Incheon has international air port and harbor.
3. Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.
//Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.
4. If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!
// If anyone want to play soccer with me, just tell me!
5. My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.
// My merit is prudence. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision, but ironically To have too many things on my mind is demerit.
6. And my another Hobby, computer games.
// My another hobby is computer games.
7. I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year. So i couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
// I like 'sudden attack' so much that i played all day long last year, so I couldn't studied well....... but I really like my school. Aren't you think so too?
8. My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
// My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society so my motto is 'carpe diem’ that means seizing the day.
9. I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.
// I’m from South Korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.
Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown. There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.
ReplyDeleteBuyeo is located in the middle of Korea. It‘s not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown because Buyeo is very important place in history. Buyeo was a capital of Bakjae. There are so many tourist attraction.
I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor
I grew up in Incheon. Incheon is a major traffic point, because There are international airport and harbor.
Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.
I'm an introvert, so it is hard to speak English to someone.
If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!
If anyone wants to play soccer with me, just tell me!
My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.
My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit because, I have a lot of things in my mind.
And my another Hobby, computer games.
And my another hobby is playing computer games.
I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year. So i couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
I like suddenattack very much, and I played all day long during last year. so I couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So my motto is ‘carpe diem’ that means seize the day.
I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.
I’m from south korea. I grew up in Gwang ju
There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown.
ReplyDeleteThere is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.
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There is not very famous, But I'm very proud of my hometown.
There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is to many tourist attractions.
I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor
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I grew up in Incheon. Incheon is a major traffic point, because There are international airport and harbor.
If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!
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If want to play soccer with me, just tell me!
My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision.
But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.
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My merit is prudent. Because of this merit. I don't make a rash decision,
But, ironically it is demerit. I have a lot of things on my mind.
And my another Hobby, computer games.
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And ma another hobby is computer games.
I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year.
So i couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
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I like suddenattack.I played suddenattack all day long last year.
So I couldn`t studied well....... but, I really like my school. Aren`t you think so too?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.
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My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’, so my motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
I grew up in a state called Gwangju,Korea.
Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown.There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.
ReplyDelete=>Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea. There is not famous place. But I'm very proud of my hometown. There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction place.
I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor
=>I grew up in Incheon. There is a major traffic point, because there has international airport and harbor.
Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.
=>Because I'm an introvert that is hard to speak in English to someone.
If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!
=>If anyone want to play soccer with me, just tell me!
My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.
=>My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit, because I have a lot of things on my mind.
And my another Hobby, computer games.
=>And my another Hobby is playing the computer games.
I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year. So i couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
=>I like sudden attack so much that I played all day long in last year. So I couldn`t studied at all....... But I really like my school. aren`t you think so?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
=>My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ and that is mean seize the day.
I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.
=> I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a city called Gwangju.